Summary of the story I wrote in my CIE English paper

  The topic was something like: Write a story which includes the words "I was at the last part of the beach". As it has been 26 days since I wrote it so I don't remember exactly what I wrote in the paper but I am giving out summary of it for you to have the idea of it.
  My family & I were having a picnic at sea side & while we were having snacks only my younger brother was not with us. He was sitting near the shore on a rock. When suddenly a giant tidal wave arose. It was so huge that it was going to flood even our hut. And my family started evacuating the hut but nobody cared about my brother. I ran towards the sea to save him & can only hear him scream but can not see him as the tide was so huge that even the sky was hidden behind it. I was wishing that he should be safe & not carried away by the sea by the time I reach the shore. While I was racing towards the beach my mother saw me & screamed to my father to stop me. When I was at the last part of the beach, just about to enter in conflict with the sea to save my brother, my father pulled my hand & dragged me back and to the place where my family was hiding from the sea. There I embraced my mother while crying & feeling guilty for I was not able to save my brother. At that moment the tidal wave crashed to the ground with a loud thud & I could see the red coloured shirt which my brother was wearing, as the water moved back to the shore. There the grateful wave has left my brother unconscious but alive! and I ran to hug him. Ambulance was called & we went back home with a memory that we would never forget.

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