Saturday, June 5, 2010

Summary of the story I wrote in my CIE English paper

  The topic was something like: Write a story which includes the words "I was at the last part of the beach". As it has been 26 days since I wrote it so I don't remember exactly what I wrote in the paper but I am giving out summary of it for you to have the idea of it.
  My family & I were having a picnic at sea side & while we were having snacks only my younger brother was not with us. He was sitting near the shore on a rock. When suddenly a giant tidal wave arose. It was so huge that it was going to flood even our hut. And my family started evacuating the hut but nobody cared about my brother. I ran towards the sea to save him & can only hear him scream but can not see him as the tide was so huge that even the sky was hidden behind it. I was wishing that he should be safe & not carried away by the sea by the time I reach the shore. While I was racing towards the beach my mother saw me & screamed to my father to stop me. When I was at the last part of the beach, just about to enter in conflict with the sea to save my brother, my father pulled my hand & dragged me back and to the place where my family was hiding from the sea. There I embraced my mother while crying & feeling guilty for I was not able to save my brother. At that moment the tidal wave crashed to the ground with a loud thud & I could see the red coloured shirt which my brother was wearing, as the water moved back to the shore. There the grateful wave has left my brother unconscious but alive! and I ran to hug him. Ambulance was called & we went back home with a memory that we would never forget.

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Thursday, June 3, 2010

Samsung Corby Pro Wi-Fi

     7 days to go, & this cute not little thing would be my dream catch. Now the problem is how am I going to spend these seven days, while impatience is getting on me.
   This mobile phone set available in 3 graceful color: titan gray, romantic pink and bluish white with full touch screen and QWERTY keypad, is the thing on which I am going to empty my wallet.
  You must be wondering why did I mentioned 7 days. So let me answer you in three simple letters CIE!!. It stands for "craftily imprisonment through education" & I am going to free my self from it forever on 10th of June. No, not forever, as the first word states "craftily" so it does have significance & I will be again caged for further two years which will be named as 'A' level & God knows how many more years.
  Okie, so where does I left my Corby? Oh, sorry I don't have it yet. But back on the topic, this elegant, stylish, mouth watering cell phone is what every student deserves who has just been bailed from 'O' level.
 
  Now answer the following questions using your own words as far as possible. ;-)

Q1 a) Why the writer has to wait for 7 days?
      b) What is being portrayed by "empty my wallet"?

Q2 a) Why did the writer disagree from his statement in paragraph 3 "free myself from it forever"?
      b) Why was the author sorry in the last paragraph?

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